One chilly Winter's evening,
When twilight's end was nearing,
One by one, with no haste, the heavenly bodies blinked,
Down upon Earth, as darkness dawned and the stars winked.
Two young girls, wrapped up to their necks, in shawls,
Moved up to the terrace to hear the Heaven's calls,
They lay down on their backs and looked up,
At God's enchanting Creation, a most treasured setup.
They lay there and stared in awe,
As the clouds passing by, dressed and undressed the bright moon, they saw,
The star strewn night sky left them dazzled,
While the mystery of it's creation, left them baffled.
They were soon out of words to appreciate and admire,
Excitement crept up their minds like wild fire,
Stretched across the deep blue velvet sky,like scattered paint on canvas,
The beautiful scene had them entranced and ravenous.
The tranquility and serenity that the stars to them offered,
Left all the noise in their heads, muffled,
They were amazed at how simple things like wonderful scenery,
Could put them out of their deepest misery.
They gazed and gazed up above, despite the biting cold,
The shapes of Mermaids, Poodles, and snakes, they saw on a cloud,
Their enjoyment was beyond explanation,
For so stunning and striking was their vision.
Two young girls on a chilly Winter's evening,
Climbed up the terrace in pursuit of star gazing.
*sigh* One of the best things we ever did. Turn into a man and marry me Brinda Kulkarni. :P :P :D :D
ReplyDeleteP.S: What do I say? You have been one of the first people I looked up to! :*
haha:D i wish:)
ReplyDeleteand you have been one of the first people that I have looked up to!:)
God!:) we have to star gaze often:)
Has the touche of personal world but still can mean so much any two girls who are bets friends...in search of a heavenly quest! Or perhaps something else entirely? :)
ReplyDeleteKeep writing girl.. :) Proud of you too! :) :)
:) thank you:) you are too kind:)
ReplyDeleteyou have painted the picture perfectly for us. I admire the two of your friendship!! May it last forever!! :) Love and Light to both of you!! =) <3
ReplyDeleteFor an avid star-gazer like me, this one is a treat!!!
ReplyDeleteU described it so beautifully...! <3
@Shruthi - aww:) thank you so much!:)
ReplyDelete@Neha- :)i am glad i made an effort at it:) the whole experience otherwise, is uncanny!:)
Hi Brinda :)
ReplyDeleteOh my!!! This is SO beautifully penned! I've read it thrice now and the sheer magic it paints only multiplies with each read!
You really made my day by visiting my blog and blessing me with so much positive praise! I'm so glad you stopped by because it has given me the chance to get acquainted with you here and discover a lovely writer!
Looking forward to reading more from you!
Best Wishes from my ♥ to yours :)
Fiona
Hello.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful expressions & a lovely tribute to the joys of friendship.
Nicely penned. I like your imagery too.
Thanks for sharing.
More Fulfilling With Love
you made MY day Fiona!:) thanks a million! you are very inspirational and very encouraging:) i consider myself very lucky to have come across PRINCESS PASSIONS!:) you are truly a wonderful writer!:)
ReplyDeletethanks for stopping by Andy:)
ReplyDeletei am happy to know that you liked my poem:)
Hi Brinda:-)
ReplyDelete`..,-Wow.. this is great., Together with a nice picture.. If i rank you from 1-10.. Id give you 10 for your perfect poem....
thanks Eduard, for visiting:) what can i say? i am overjoyed:)
ReplyDeleteYou are a great poet my friend! You wrote this with the true spirit of a poet, you are the one that make me stop for a moment and rethink what I read! It's a magic presents in you words that make me ponder it for several times because I wont just leave it by not knowing what it really says, because I know something special lies behind it!
ReplyDeletemagic imagery
ReplyDeletetook me through a virtual tour,ur words say it all.
It seems u'r just starting out in the fascinating world of poetry(like me).would love to read more from u.
Rohit
floating-expressions.blogspot.com
haha...thanks again! :)
ReplyDelete@Prime Aque - :) i am really happy to know that:) thanks so much for stopping by:)
ReplyDelete@Rohit - yes i am:) thanks for stopping by, and thanks for your kind words of encouragement:)
P.S - yes, i will visit your blog:)
:) @Jyottsnaa!:) you aren't allowed to thank me anymore!!:D
ReplyDeleteBrinda Baby! Applies back to you! :D :D
ReplyDeleteno it does not:D
ReplyDeletebeautiful. you are very talented. i love the brilliance of the words that you wrote, they just came from your tiny heart. beautiful :)
ReplyDeletethank you so much Inspector Saahab:)
ReplyDeleteoh yes it does!! I am tired of telling you two...stop telling thanks! :P
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